Well done Scarlet! A really good piece of writing and I am really pleased that you have been able to include your feelings. I am also impressed that you have remembered how to add a subordinate clause into your work. Fantastic!
– Just remember to use a question mark for questions.
Amazing Scarlet! I loved reading your work, especially the fantastic description, “She had short brown hair that glistened in the sunlight”! I loved how you used speech marks, but at the end you accidentally forgot your question mark.
But very very well done!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well done Scarlet! A really good piece of writing and I am really pleased that you have been able to include your feelings. I am also impressed that you have remembered how to add a subordinate clause into your work. Fantastic!
– Just remember to use a question mark for questions.
Amazing Scarlet! I loved reading your work, especially the fantastic description, “She had short brown hair that glistened in the sunlight”! I loved how you used speech marks, but at the end you accidentally forgot your question mark.
But very very well done!!!!!!!!!!!!