Fantastic blog Mabel. You have made this really exciting to read and I really want to know more about the exciting adventure that the heroic character went through. I love your use of personification where you said ‘books were sat clumsily…’ Keep up the good work!
– Perhaps you could try varying your sentence length to change the pace of your writing.
Thank you for you for your comment; I now know my next steps in my writing,and I will remember to vary my sentences length in my next piece of literacy work.
Fantastic blog Mabel. You have made this really exciting to read and I really want to know more about the exciting adventure that the heroic character went through. I love your use of personification where you said ‘books were sat clumsily…’ Keep up the good work!
– Perhaps you could try varying your sentence length to change the pace of your writing.
Thank you for you for your comment; I now know my next steps in my writing,and I will remember to vary my sentences length in my next piece of literacy work.