Well done Maddy. You have been able to use some great descriptions in your writing. You are really starting to set the scene for the reader.
– Make sure you read your work through and edit it to make sure each sentence makes sense.
This is a really good piece of writing Maddy.
– You have used similes.
– You have used loads of WOW words.
– Try and you a variety of punctuation. E.g ! . , ; : ” ‘ ? .
Well done Maddy. You have been able to use some great descriptions in your writing. You are really starting to set the scene for the reader.
– Make sure you read your work through and edit it to make sure each sentence makes sense.
This is a really good piece of writing Maddy.
– You have used similes.
– You have used loads of WOW words.
– Try and you a variety of punctuation. E.g ! . , ; : ” ‘ ? .
Brilliant and interesting writing maddy you are a true author
Zalie