Well done Lal! That sounds like a very fun Christmas. I am really pleased that you have remembered that a new speaker always starts on a new line. Keep up the good work.
– Make sure you always read your work through to check each sentence makes sense and then edit your work.
I like when you don’t only say said mum you say different words like exclaimed. and I also like it when you said awsom new bike with flames like on a motor bike because it makes me feel like I want to have that bike.
well done.
Hi Lal,
I love that you have chosen to write about Christmas because it is one of my favourite days. I love that you have used speech and used a rhetorical question.
But to make sure everyone understands your writing, at the bottom you could change the font because I found it hard to read.
But overall I think you have done a piece of amazing work!
Well done Lal! That sounds like a very fun Christmas. I am really pleased that you have remembered that a new speaker always starts on a new line. Keep up the good work.
– Make sure you always read your work through to check each sentence makes sense and then edit your work.
Thank you Miss Essex!
I will make sure I edit my blog after I have finished typing, and check my sentences that it makes sense.
I like when you don’t only say said mum you say different words like exclaimed. and I also like it when you said awsom new bike with flames like on a motor bike because it makes me feel like I want to have that bike.
well done.
Hi Lal,
I love that you have chosen to write about Christmas because it is one of my favourite days. I love that you have used speech and used a rhetorical question.
But to make sure everyone understands your writing, at the bottom you could change the font because I found it hard to read.
But overall I think you have done a piece of amazing work!
Great work Lal I loved it I thought it was brilliant and amazing