Excellent blog Owen! You have made the fun fair sound very fun and I would definitely like to visit it. I love the fact that you have described what Tivoli looked like because it has built up a bigger picture for the reader and I think that it was a really good idea to end your blog by using a rhetorical question because it really draws the reader in.
– When you are writing descriptions of different places remember to consider all of the senses. What can you see? Hear? Smell? Feel?
Excellent blog Owen! You have made the fun fair sound very fun and I would definitely like to visit it. I love the fact that you have described what Tivoli looked like because it has built up a bigger picture for the reader and I think that it was a really good idea to end your blog by using a rhetorical question because it really draws the reader in.
– When you are writing descriptions of different places remember to consider all of the senses. What can you see? Hear? Smell? Feel?