Well done Charlie. Visiting the lego exhibition sounds like a very exciting day out. You are using good detail to describe your day which builds up a good picture for the reader.
– Think about varying the punctuation within your work. Could you use an exclamation mark? A rhetorical question? Speech? Commas?
Well done Charlie. Visiting the lego exhibition sounds like a very exciting day out. You are using good detail to describe your day which builds up a good picture for the reader.
– Think about varying the punctuation within your work. Could you use an exclamation mark? A rhetorical question? Speech? Commas?