Well done Ida, I didn’t know that rhyme was Tudor. I like it, do you. For me the best bit is when it says ‘ then the black bird pinched her nose.’ Because it is humerous. Read through because I think you have made a few spelling mistakes. Very good work.
Well done Ida, I didn’t know that rhyme was Tudor. I like it, do you. For me the best bit is when it says ‘ then the black bird pinched her nose.’ Because it is humerous. Read through because I think you have made a few spelling mistakes. Very good work.
Thanks grace I will do my spelling better.
Very good work Ida I really enjoyed it…..best poem ever!!!! 🙂 It was very interesting and creative.
It was had to figger out then I got it.
Hi Ida! I like the last line a lot! Good job.
Thanks sarah