It was very wall written. I liked it a lot.
I think it is brilliant. I wouuld never of thought up such an amazing description which included ‘Sweat poured down in gallons’ and ‘Lucsious heat emerged out the suns rays’.However I do think its a bit rushed when the weather changed.
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It was very wall written. I liked it a lot.
I think it is brilliant. I wouuld never of thought up such an amazing description which included ‘Sweat poured down in gallons’ and ‘Lucsious heat emerged out the suns rays’.However I do think its a bit rushed when the weather changed.