This is a great poem Aaima, well done.
Remember that a proper noun ( a person’s name or the name of a place) has a capital letter therefore Henry needs to be written with a capital H.
Keep up the good work!
I loved your poem and you described the things very well, also including rhyming words at the end of your lines. But occasionally you didn’t use a capital letter! But overall it had a strong beat and was brilliant.
This is a great poem Aaima, well done.
Remember that a proper noun ( a person’s name or the name of a place) has a capital letter therefore Henry needs to be written with a capital H.
Keep up the good work!
Aaima,
I loved your poem and you described the things very well, also including rhyming words at the end of your lines. But occasionally you didn’t use a capital letter! But overall it had a strong beat and was brilliant.