Anna, I love your humerous style of writing! This piece made me chuckle to myself as I could picture my, sometimes annoying, brother being swept away 🙂
Keep up the good work.
I have a son that enjoys a good storm and another son who use to hide under the table if it was too loud. I like the idea that this brother has been ‘swept off his feet’ literally! Good writing.
I enjoyed reading the aminzing peice of writing that you had done. I could really imagine it and I loved every single part of it as I carried of reading. I really enjoyed the ending and I wonder what could happen to your brother. Well done!
This is really good Anna!
It is very funny. I would love my brother to be swept away in a gust of wind but it probably wouldn’t be funny at the time!
I love the idea and the description is really good. The ONLY bad thing is that you missed out a comma near the end. I wonder what happened to the brother?
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Well done!
Anna, I love your humerous style of writing! This piece made me chuckle to myself as I could picture my, sometimes annoying, brother being swept away 🙂
Keep up the good work.
I have a son that enjoys a good storm and another son who use to hide under the table if it was too loud. I like the idea that this brother has been ‘swept off his feet’ literally! Good writing.
I enjoyed reading the aminzing peice of writing that you had done. I could really imagine it and I loved every single part of it as I carried of reading. I really enjoyed the ending and I wonder what could happen to your brother. Well done!
This is really good Anna!
It is very funny. I would love my brother to be swept away in a gust of wind but it probably wouldn’t be funny at the time!
I love the idea and the description is really good. The ONLY bad thing is that you missed out a comma near the end. I wonder what happened to the brother?
😉
Well done!
A real surprise ending! Is this what you hope might happen to your brother one day?! Hopefully not…
Anna. Was this wishful thinking?! Very fun and abstract posting.