The spider at night

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4 Responses to The spider at night

  1. Rafi says:

    Wow Grace, this was incredible.
    How did you come up with all that wonderful description. I loved the way that you highlighted the five words in the prompt so that people knew that you had used them! Keep up the great work and remember to keep on posting blogs since they are amazing to read!

  2. Jessica says:

    Hi Grace,
    I really like this idea, however I don’t get why you mentioned the playing cards and didn’t just find a more practical way to use the word “fifty”. I also don’t understand why Anna has to clean up after Catherine and why Catherine’s parents usually tidy her room. Anyway, I like the description. What happens next? Please write a sequel!
    🙂

  3. Dr. Lisa (Team 100WC) says:

    Grace,

    This was excellent. I didn’t suspect that Anna was up to mischief. I thought she was saving the spider. I agree with Jessica that you might have found a really interesting way to incorporate the fifty.

    I enjoyed this approach to the challenge. Keep it up.

    • Grace says:

      I agree with both of you. I did not put in the fifty untill I realized I had 99 words and none of them were ‘fifty’.
      Next time I will plan it out better.

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