My skin feels prickly just thinking about your piece of writing on spiders. A great feeling of suspense.
It was very descriptive and creepy!!! well done 🙂
I really enjoyed reading it and it was very discriptive. I could really imagine it in my head. Well done!
You use your words to great effect and leave me wanting to know what happens next. A great piece of writing Rafi, well done!
Wow Rafi, what a terrifying piece of writing! You’ve made some great word choices (I loved ‘scuttling’!) and your opening sentence in particular was so descriptive I felt like I was watching a film! Well done.
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My skin feels prickly just thinking about your piece of writing on spiders. A great feeling of suspense.
It was very descriptive and creepy!!! well done 🙂
I really enjoyed reading it and it was very discriptive. I could really imagine it in my head. Well done!
You use your words to great effect and leave me wanting to know what happens next. A great piece of writing Rafi, well done!
Wow Rafi, what a terrifying piece of writing! You’ve made some great word choices (I loved ‘scuttling’!) and your opening sentence in particular was so descriptive I felt like I was watching a film! Well done.