Well done Freya this is a great piece with some interesting ideas about wealth. I like the way that you ask the reader questions – it really makes you think. Wealth isn’t always about how hard you work in exams, but it certainly helps!
I think you have given both sides of the argument and explained your point very well. I think that many rich people, such as Bill Gates, do work hard for wealth and give lots to charity.
Well done Freya this is a great piece with some interesting ideas about wealth. I like the way that you ask the reader questions – it really makes you think. Wealth isn’t always about how hard you work in exams, but it certainly helps!
I think you have given both sides of the argument and explained your point very well. I think that many rich people, such as Bill Gates, do work hard for wealth and give lots to charity.