Hi Imogen
I really like it how you have left a clif hander at the end of your work
but even though you have to do a 100 wc maby you could have a chapter two
because it is so intrestring
from beatrix
Imogen
I thought your story was amazing you used wonderful words instead of said and your choice of vocabulary was just great. I couldn’t find any mistakes.
Hi Imogen
I really like it how you have left a clif hander at the end of your work
but even though you have to do a 100 wc maby you could have a chapter two
because it is so intrestring
from beatrix
Imogen
I thought your story was amazing you used wonderful words instead of said and your choice of vocabulary was just great. I couldn’t find any mistakes.