Hi Harry,
Your piece of writing was evocative and descriptive at the same time. You did make a couple of spelling mistakes but that is resolved by reading your work over and over again. Overall I thought it was very good so keep up the good work.
Harry
I really like the storyline it made me laugh I especially like the part when the demon throws a red fire ball. Although it was good next time you should finish your speech with a speech mark. Overall I thought your story was great.
Harry,
You certainly created some interesting characters here demonstrated by their actions and speech. Be mindful of where those quotation marks go when writing dialogue. Nice 100WC entry–good job!
Hi Harry,
Your piece of writing was evocative and descriptive at the same time. You did make a couple of spelling mistakes but that is resolved by reading your work over and over again. Overall I thought it was very good so keep up the good work.
Harry
I really like the storyline it made me laugh I especially like the part when the demon throws a red fire ball. Although it was good next time you should finish your speech with a speech mark. Overall I thought your story was great.
Hi harry,
this piece of writing was awesome I loved the way you used humar in your writing. Next time you could use more adjectives in your writing.
Harry,
You certainly created some interesting characters here demonstrated by their actions and speech. Be mindful of where those quotation marks go when writing dialogue. Nice 100WC entry–good job!