Zis is a good story, Louis. I especially like zi accent zat you have given zi dwarf.
Great story Louis, I particularly liked the dwarf character and use of speech.
Spelling the sound of an accent is a great skill. Very fun idea. I would like tor read more…..
I really like the story and the way you wrote it, the story is very imaginative. I really like the way you displayed the dwarves speech!
I thought your story was brilliant And I particulerly use of speech And I can’t wait to read more.
Hi Louis, a great 100WC post. I love the accent that you gave the dwarf, it really helped to form the character in the readers mind. The use of speech in general was very clever and imaginative as it was engaging. Keep up the good work!
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Zis is a good story, Louis. I especially like zi accent zat you have given zi dwarf.
Great story Louis, I particularly liked the dwarf character and use of speech.
Spelling the sound of an accent is a great skill. Very fun idea. I would like tor read more…..
I really like the story and the way you wrote it, the story is very imaginative. I really like the way you displayed the dwarves speech!
I thought your story was brilliant
And I particulerly use of speech
And I can’t wait to read more.
Hi Louis, a great 100WC post. I love the accent that you gave the dwarf, it really helped to form the character in the readers mind. The use of speech in general was very clever and imaginative as it was engaging. Keep up the good work!