The Old man- 100 WC

Posted on March 27, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The Old man- 100 WC

  1. Jessica says:
    March 27, 2012 at 4:20 pm

    I really enjoyed reading this as you have used lots of great words such as “leered”. I really want to know what happens next, please write a sequel.

  2. Mrs Halford (Team 100WC) says:
    March 27, 2012 at 7:09 pm

    Hello Alfie, this is a scary entry to the 100WC. I like the way you left it on a cliffhanger; maybe you will write some more some time? Well written with excellent descriptions. Did you write these in class?

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