I thought Bert’s blog , I don’t want to, was very good because it was very funny and that argument happens a lot in real life.
To improve it I would use a little less dialogue and more description and I would read it through again because there were some mistakes that didn’t make sense. So well done Bert.
I thought Bert’s blog , I don’t want to, was very good because it was very funny and that argument happens a lot in real life.
To improve it I would use a little less dialogue and more description and I would read it through again because there were some mistakes that didn’t make sense. So well done Bert.