What a fabulous ending; I didn’t expect that! I thought it was going to end with a pool of melted chocolate so it was a nice surprise to read an unexpected ending. There are a couple of places where you could include full stops. Maybe you could read through and see if you can spot where they should go. I will give you a clue, they would go in the first long sentence. I hope you enjoy your Easter holiday. 🙂
How lucky to get so many chocolate rabbits and how sad that one melted, but then to get a real one in its place, well that’s just magical and so imaginative.
Thank you for sharing your lovely story on the 100WC, Aaima.
Good job but why didn’t all the other bunnies melt ? Hahahah I like your post a lot.
Hi Aaima,
What a fabulous ending; I didn’t expect that! I thought it was going to end with a pool of melted chocolate so it was a nice surprise to read an unexpected ending. There are a couple of places where you could include full stops. Maybe you could read through and see if you can spot where they should go. I will give you a clue, they would go in the first long sentence. I hope you enjoy your Easter holiday. 🙂
Hello Aaima,
How lucky to get so many chocolate rabbits and how sad that one melted, but then to get a real one in its place, well that’s just magical and so imaginative.
Thank you for sharing your lovely story on the 100WC, Aaima.
Mrs Shaw(Team 100WC)