Well written Liam. I enjoyed this one. You need to remember to put capitals at the beginig of all you sentences. You still need to have a good read and edit your work before posting – MUM
Thanks Liam for this amazing blog. I really enjoyed the first paragraph because it was very enticing. However make sure that you when you type and ‘I’ you make it a capital. I also really enjoyed the storyline. Keep on blogging!
I really liked it but maybe you should put a capital for”i”.
I like how you vary your sentence starters!
Well written Liam. I enjoyed this one. You need to remember to put capitals at the beginig of all you sentences. You still need to have a good read and edit your work before posting – MUM
Turner class read your blog in ICT. ‘An excellent story’, said Charlie.
Veronika wonders, ‘Was it a dream?’
Turner class
Thank you for reding my blog, and Veronika it wasn’t a dream it was all real.
Thanks Liam for this amazing blog. I really enjoyed the first paragraph because it was very enticing. However make sure that you when you type and ‘I’ you make it a capital. I also really enjoyed the storyline. Keep on blogging!