Harry,
What terrific names: River of Epic & Town of Myths! A very interesting 100WC story. The end was a bit confusing–they killed the dragon and he stirred after? Keep writing. (Teacher of English, Ocean City, NJ, USA)
We liked how you began your story telling that the dragon stirred and then ended with the same wording! We were a little confused by what “the river of epic stirring” means. We also liked some of your word choice, for example when you used “ill” instead of sick.
We are wondering how the townspeople killed the evil dragon?
Harry,
What terrific names: River of Epic & Town of Myths! A very interesting 100WC story. The end was a bit confusing–they killed the dragon and he stirred after? Keep writing. (Teacher of English, Ocean City, NJ, USA)
We liked how you began your story telling that the dragon stirred and then ended with the same wording! We were a little confused by what “the river of epic stirring” means. We also liked some of your word choice, for example when you used “ill” instead of sick.
We are wondering how the townspeople killed the evil dragon?