Xbox’s get a bit like that, I’m with you in that Warhammer is much better! (I think as a teacher I’m supposed to say you should have done your homework, but… no!) I liked the way you listed your choices and then showed your thought process as to how you got to the one you eventually did. Just ask your teacher to go over there, their, and they’re with you. (Or look here http://www.wisc-online.com/Objects/ViewObject.aspx?ID=ESL1402 )
What an interesting use of the prompt Jude? An X box game with a dragon, I like your use of questions in this piece. Try adding in a little more description in your writing. Thank you for your 100WC entry.
Xbox’s get a bit like that, I’m with you in that Warhammer is much better! (I think as a teacher I’m supposed to say you should have done your homework, but… no!) I liked the way you listed your choices and then showed your thought process as to how you got to the one you eventually did. Just ask your teacher to go over there, their, and they’re with you. (Or look here http://www.wisc-online.com/Objects/ViewObject.aspx?ID=ESL1402 )
Sarah
What an interesting use of the prompt Jude? An X box game with a dragon, I like your use of questions in this piece. Try adding in a little more description in your writing. Thank you for your 100WC entry.