Wow, i like the way it rhymes and all of your retorical questions. However your post is all about the consequences of rain, you can write about the good things about rain. Good Luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I think that it is a very good descriptive poem and is very interesting. You have written a great peace of work. The spelling is great, I like the detail I felt I want to read on, I really felt like anwsering the questions, Also It is a great rhyme, Well done!!
Hi Anna W.I liked your poem because it rhymed and I liked the idea of doing all the lines as question. I enjoyed reading your poem and I can’t wait till your next post.
I love your poem the way you put the questions in.my favourite line in the poem is ‘Do you know what rain is for?
If you do I want to know more.’ because it really made me think.
Hello, your work is amazing. I loved the questions and I also like how you used your punctuation. If you were to edit it then you could of used diffent starting words for your sentences.
This poem is great. What I liked about it is; how it rhymes – it really catches my attention. Furthermore, making each line a question (interesting way to put it). Also, it’s clever how every line in the first paragraph starts with ‘Have you’. Plus, in the second paragraph each line starts with ‘Can rain’. Maybe you could of added in some description. For example, instead of writing ‘Have you ever heard rain as you wake’, you could of written, ‘Have you heard delicate drops when you wake?’ Apart from that, well done, it’s brilliant!
Hi,
Wow, what an amazing post. How did you come up with this? I love how you have made it rhyme, but it still makes perfect sense! A very unique piece of work. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Anna W.
It was a really good poem and the questions were good. Also, the rhyming was amazing!
But to improve your work you could use more descriptive words!
Well Done!!
WOW!
Your poem is really good, I loved how you used question marks. I liked your title; it made me want to read on. I can’t think of any improvments. It was AMAZING!
Wow Anna! I have never seen anything so… spectacular! You must have copied that, but that would be cheating. You should try and publish that poem to a poem writer, he may definetely say yes. Keep up the amazing work! Plus, I have some information about rain for you:
How does rain form?
Water droplets form from warm air. As the warm air rises in the sky it cools. Water vapor (invisible water in the air) always exists in our air. Warm air holds quite a bit of water. For example, in the summer it is usually very humid. When enough of these droplets collect together, we see them as clouds. If the clouds are big enough and have enough water droplets, the droplets bang together and form even bigger drops. When the drops get heavy, they fall because of gravity, and you see and feel rain.
This info was from ‘Weather WizKidz’ if you want to find more.
Hi Anna what a beautiful poem I liked the way you used questions and my favourite sentenses was if you do I want to know more because its a brilliant way to finish!
What a beautiful poem! I love how you used questions to make poetry : o)
Mrs.Goins in Texas
Yes rain wakes me up all the time bye the way I LOVE your poem!
Wow, i like the way it rhymes and all of your retorical questions. However your post is all about the consequences of rain, you can write about the good things about rain. Good Luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow, I think that it is a very good descriptive poem and is very interesting. You have written a great peace of work. The spelling is great, I like the detail I felt I want to read on, I really felt like anwsering the questions, Also It is a great rhyme, Well done!!
Hi Anna W.I liked your poem because it rhymed and I liked the idea of doing all the lines as question. I enjoyed reading your poem and I can’t wait till your next post.
I love your poem the way you put the questions in.my favourite line in the poem is ‘Do you know what rain is for?
If you do I want to know more.’ because it really made me think.
Hello, your work is amazing. I loved the questions and I also like how you used your punctuation. If you were to edit it then you could of used diffent starting words for your sentences.
Well done!!!
This poem is great. What I liked about it is; how it rhymes – it really catches my attention. Furthermore, making each line a question (interesting way to put it). Also, it’s clever how every line in the first paragraph starts with ‘Have you’. Plus, in the second paragraph each line starts with ‘Can rain’. Maybe you could of added in some description. For example, instead of writing ‘Have you ever heard rain as you wake’, you could of written, ‘Have you heard delicate drops when you wake?’ Apart from that, well done, it’s brilliant!
Hi,
Wow, what an amazing post. How did you come up with this? I love how you have made it rhyme, but it still makes perfect sense! A very unique piece of work. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Anna W.
It was a really good poem and the questions were good. Also, the rhyming was amazing!
But to improve your work you could use more descriptive words!
Well Done!!
Hello this peace of work is really good because I like the use of question mark and nice rythming. But you could start with diffenert words.
WOW!
Your poem is really good, I loved how you used question marks. I liked your title; it made me want to read on. I can’t think of any improvments. It was AMAZING!
Wow Anna! I have never seen anything so… spectacular! You must have copied that, but that would be cheating. You should try and publish that poem to a poem writer, he may definetely say yes. Keep up the amazing work! Plus, I have some information about rain for you:
How does rain form?
Water droplets form from warm air. As the warm air rises in the sky it cools. Water vapor (invisible water in the air) always exists in our air. Warm air holds quite a bit of water. For example, in the summer it is usually very humid. When enough of these droplets collect together, we see them as clouds. If the clouds are big enough and have enough water droplets, the droplets bang together and form even bigger drops. When the drops get heavy, they fall because of gravity, and you see and feel rain.
This info was from ‘Weather WizKidz’ if you want to find more.
Hi Anna what a beautiful poem I liked the way you used questions and my favourite sentenses was if you do I want to know more because its a brilliant way to finish!