Hello Louis.CB,
I didn’t really understand the first few lines of your poem but apart from that it was brilliant. I loved the way you included description with such ease and the connectives. I got a bit confused at one point but other than that it was perfect.
Keep up the good work and carry on blogging as it is a pleasure to read your work.
Hello Louis.CB,
I didn’t really understand the first few lines of your poem but apart from that it was brilliant. I loved the way you included description with such ease and the connectives. I got a bit confused at one point but other than that it was perfect.
Keep up the good work and carry on blogging as it is a pleasure to read your work.