Alright Jesse, a well constructed poem, but a bit ‘big’ (font) for my liking. Capital letters are needed to replace easy words, and it is quite hard to understand the poem. I am not sure if it is supposed to rhyme or not.
Hello Jesse. Your blog was incredibly good as your format of poem worked brilliantly. However, there were a couple of mistakes:
1. You need to use more adjectives.
2. You forgot to include the 2/3 words at the end.
3. The writing was very big so it made the blog look a bit monstrous.
Apart from that, everything was up to scratch so remember to carry on blogging! 🙂
Alright Jesse, a well constructed poem, but a bit ‘big’ (font) for my liking. Capital letters are needed to replace easy words, and it is quite hard to understand the poem. I am not sure if it is supposed to rhyme or not.
Great poem it really emphasizes how much it matters to you to have your brother back,but how confusing it was.
Hello Jesse. Your blog was incredibly good as your format of poem worked brilliantly. However, there were a couple of mistakes:
1. You need to use more adjectives.
2. You forgot to include the 2/3 words at the end.
3. The writing was very big so it made the blog look a bit monstrous.
Apart from that, everything was up to scratch so remember to carry on blogging! 🙂