Hello Cleo,
I love the way you use your speech marks. It’s good you remembered to start a new line when someone stops talking. You didn’t say much about your family it would be nice to know. Where does freddy come from? How old is he?
I think you used to many commas when you didn’t need to, however over all it’s a very good piece of writing.
Please reply to my question.
nice poem funny but who is tom? from hermione
Hello Cleo,
I love the way you use your speech marks. It’s good you remembered to start a new line when someone stops talking. You didn’t say much about your family it would be nice to know. Where does freddy come from? How old is he?
I think you used to many commas when you didn’t need to, however over all it’s a very good piece of writing.
Please reply to my question.
Hi Cleo
I liked the way you called yourself another name
and you missed out a speach mark for the word No
from Dilan