Emrald city

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to Emrald city

  1. Alex Carey says:
    October 15, 2012 at 4:40 pm

    Hi Matthew,
    Very good description and I like the phrase ‘Her joy was short lived’.

  2. Holly says:
    October 17, 2012 at 3:22 pm

    Hi Matthew,
    I like the smelling sense you have put in:
    ‘a weird lime and lemon smell hit them’
    Next time you could add some more alliteration.

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