This is Ben’s Mum. I am enjoying reading the blogs on your Tetherdown blog. I thought your description was good and I agree with Lauren, it is important to remember capital letters. Perhaps it would be good to edit the piece before you post the comment.
Well done Ben you used all the senses and emotion. Just remeber at the start of thesentence capital letter
Thanks Lauren I will try and remember to put in capitals!!!!!
This is Ben’s Mum. I am enjoying reading the blogs on your Tetherdown blog. I thought your description was good and I agree with Lauren, it is important to remember capital letters. Perhaps it would be good to edit the piece before you post the comment.
Ben, wow! I found that I nearly laughed off my seat. You have such an imaginative brain!!!!!