Emerald city

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to Emerald city

  1. Oliver says:
    October 17, 2012 at 10:20 am

    Hi,

    I think it’s good the way you described it.

    Remember to check it otherwise it might not make sense and check for spelling.

  2. Hugo says:
    October 21, 2012 at 5:49 pm

    Hi Alex,

    I really liked your description because it was very intense, but in the first sentence you spelt through wrong.

    Hugo

  3. Holly says:
    October 22, 2012 at 8:37 am

    Hi Alex,

    I like your blog, great metaphor : ‘Dorothy was stiff” but
    next time you could add more adjectives throughout your work.

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