Well done Sam with the adjectives (e.g ruby,red apron) The spelling was a little twisted for weird and aren’t they supposed to be called people of Oz not Winkies
Hey Sam, 😉
I like how you have described the Emerald city & the food there!
although for next time were we not supposed to write as the author not one of the characters? 😛
I love how you said ruby red apren.
Very good sam liked the idia of the winkies whispering and the lion loving candy hope to see your next blog!!!
I would LOVE green candy floss and green kitkats and their also realy good in a story.
I like your description
I think that your description is good.
My only improvement is that we we dosen’t make sense.
I like your description of the Emerald city especially ruby red apron.
I really liked your description of the ruby red it was very funny when you wrote toto stared at the bottle of milk.
Well done Sam with the adjectives (e.g ruby,red apron) The spelling was a little twisted for weird and aren’t they supposed to be called people of Oz not Winkies
I think that is very good. I like ruby red apron.
Remember to make sure it makes sense.
Hi Sam,
I really like your description and your ending is really good, although you could improve your spelling.
Hi Sam,
I like your alliteration regarding the ‘ ruby red apron ‘. Next time you could add a simile to give more description.
Hey Sam, 😉
I like how you have described the Emerald city & the food there!
although for next time were we not supposed to write as the author not one of the characters? 😛