Hi Clem,
nice work very descriptive , next time remember to read through your work at the end, and check your spellings despite that great work congratulations!!! 🙂
hi clem well done very descriptive the only thing I would say is try and look though your work to see if you’ve made a mistake a part from that well done
Hi Clem,
nice work very descriptive , next time remember to read through your work at the end, and check your spellings despite that great work congratulations!!! 🙂
Well done Clem, I loved the descriptions. My one improvemeni is to get the spellings better.
Clem what a great story! Just remember all of your punctuation.?!:D
hi clem well done very descriptive the only thing I would say is try and look though your work to see if you’ve made a mistake a part from that well done
Clem
I like the way you have included the senses it makes it real. But Tin man and scarecrow didn’t go to sleep. Well done. J