The new Emarold city

Posted on October 15, 2012 by Deleted User
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2 Responses to The new Emarold city

  1. nathalieD says:
    October 18, 2012 at 7:28 am

    Well done Sophie I love your descriptive piece of work.

  2. Holly says:
    October 20, 2012 at 1:04 pm

    Hi Sophie,
    I like your simile, linking the snake to the sound of whispers. Next time you could add a the sense of taste.

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