Hi Hal, that was a brilliant description. As soon as you finished reading it you could imagine exactly what it looks like.
Hi Hal, That was a really good description, I was a bit confused trying to work out how lemonade could be fascinating!
Hi Hal, brilliant piece of work I like the bit when you thought of the walls are glimmering with emeralds, great idea.
Well done
Hi Hal I like your simile green as the inside of a lime . Although there is room for improvement on your grammar.
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Hi Hal,
that was a brilliant description. As soon as you finished reading it you could imagine exactly what it looks like.
Hi Hal,
That was a really good description, I was a bit confused trying to work out how lemonade could be fascinating!
Hi Hal,
brilliant piece of work I like the bit when you thought of the walls are glimmering with emeralds, great idea.
Well done
Hi Hal I like your simile green as the inside of a lime . Although there is room for improvement on your grammar.