Hi Louis, Great adjectives and similes like ‘sea green city it is just like paradise but lime green’.
brilliant discription some good similles and metephores my favorite was the sea green lemonade which i think is very different and has a lot of imagionation
Hi , amazing piece of work I really liked the bit when you thoght of sea green city its a great idea and dazzling is a good word.
Well done.b
Hi Louis, I like your description about how it was Paradise however i think you used green to much and you didn’t even say it was emerald green.
Hi, Good work and words like dazzling but try more intresting puncshation.
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Hi Louis,
Great adjectives and similes like ‘sea green city it is just like paradise but lime green’.
brilliant discription some good similles and metephores my favorite was the sea green lemonade which i think is very different and has a lot of imagionation
Hi ,
amazing piece of work I really liked the bit when you thoght of sea green city its a great idea and dazzling is a good word.
Well done.b
Hi Louis,
I like your description about how it was Paradise however i think you used green to much and you didn’t even say it was emerald green.
Hi,
Good work and words like dazzling but try more intresting puncshation.