emarald city

5 Responses to emarald city

1. Maddie m says:

   October 15, 2012 at 6:55 pm

   Hi Ella
   I like the way you used lots of similies but dont forget your capital letter for Oz who is a person.
   From Maddie
2. Ben P says:

   October 17, 2012 at 5:41 pm

   Hi Ella
   I liked your description and the similie ‘All as green as one single pea on your plate’ was very good
   From Ben P
3. Milla says:

   October 18, 2012 at 5:11 pm

   Hi Ella
   great discription of emerald city some great similies and metephores to give extra affect just make sure you dont miss out punctuation and try to read through your work first but well done and great job.
   from Milla
4. Eve says:

   October 20, 2012 at 11:53 am

   Hi Ella M,
   I loved your post as you used a lot of similes but you could have improved your punctuation. 😉
   From Eve
   • Ella M says:

     October 21, 2012 at 12:11 pm

     Hi Eve,
     lots of other people said that my punctuation was bad but I will make it better also, I am going to read yours and so far it is awesome!
     From Ella M

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