Well done Rafi for writing a piece of non-fiction writing. I really enjoyed the topic you chose because learning about the Tudors is all new to me 🙂
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I love the way you describe the events in such a real way. It is packed with facts as well. How amazing you share a birthday with a King! But may I just say that Catherine of Aragon comes before Anne Boleyn and that the last to wives are spelt wrong. It is Kathryn Howard and Katherine Parr. I know alot about the Queens like Jane Seymore was never coranated but the rest was new to me. Well done.
Well done Rafi for writing a piece of non-fiction writing. I really enjoyed the topic you chose because learning about the Tudors is all new to me 🙂
Remember to read your work aloud to yourself to check that it makes sense. Can you see how you could improve this piece of writing?
I love the way you describe the events in such a real way. It is packed with facts as well. How amazing you share a birthday with a King! But may I just say that Catherine of Aragon comes before Anne Boleyn and that the last to wives are spelt wrong. It is Kathryn Howard and Katherine Parr. I know alot about the Queens like Jane Seymore was never coranated but the rest was new to me. Well done.