Well done Anna for becoming such a keen blogger 🙂
Remember when using speech to say who is speaking and put the speech in context, for example:
‘Hurry up, we’re going to be late!’ shouted Annabelle anxiously as the children raced towards the platform.
Suddenly the train came into view. ‘Wow a real steam train!’ exclaimed Harry.
Can you try edit and improve your story?
Well done Anna for becoming such a keen blogger 🙂
Remember when using speech to say who is speaking and put the speech in context, for example:
‘Hurry up, we’re going to be late!’ shouted Annabelle anxiously as the children raced towards the platform.
Suddenly the train came into view. ‘Wow a real steam train!’ exclaimed Harry.
Can you try edit and improve your story?