I wonder how old Jacob’s grandad is now if you only count leap years! I like that Jacob is reading to the reader. Jesse make sure you re-read your work, and add some punctuation. Keep on writing for the 100WC, I’m looking forward to reading more of your work.
I wonder how old Jacob’s grandad is now if you only count leap years! I like that Jacob is reading to the reader. Jesse make sure you re-read your work, and add some punctuation. Keep on writing for the 100WC, I’m looking forward to reading more of your work.
i think it`s very exsiting but i think it needs comers and full stops well done jesse
You might want to think about full stops but apart from that it is great.
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