positive1: i like she couldnt remeber what was happerning so she did soething any way.
positive2: I like who she forgot something but she couldn’t remeber
target : You could of used more intersting words.
Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary school 100 word challenge blog http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html
Make sure you check your spelling and punctuation. I thought it was pretty good though.
positive1: i like she couldnt remeber what was happerning so she did soething any way.
positive2: I like who she forgot something but she couldn’t remeber
target : You could of used more intersting words.
Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary school 100 word challenge blog
http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html
I really liked your story. I thought that it was cool.