oh dear I forgot it was a leap year

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3 Responses to oh dear I forgot it was a leap year

  1. Jenna B. (St. John Vianney) says:

    Make sure you check your spelling and punctuation. I thought it was pretty good though.

  2. Hollie Allway says:

    positive1: i like she couldnt remeber what was happerning so she did soething any way.
    positive2: I like who she forgot something but she couldn’t remeber
    target : You could of used more intersting words.
    Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary school 100 word challenge blog
    http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html

  3. Maggie St. John Vianney says:

    I really liked your story. I thought that it was cool.

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