I really loved your 100WC Raphael! I thought it was great that you wrote about a birthday being on the 29th as it made the story really interesting. The ending also summed up your writing very well. Great post!
A good variety of sentence openers like today, Oh, i, it
Very imaginative sanario.
Try using a range of big and small sentences.
Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary School 100 Word Challenge Blog: http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html
Very nice! I thought that it was very well written and I hope that the people didn’t come early. Great Job!
I really loved your 100WC Raphael! I thought it was great that you wrote about a birthday being on the 29th as it made the story really interesting. The ending also summed up your writing very well. Great post!
A good variety of sentence openers like today, Oh, i, it
Very imaginative sanario.
Try using a range of big and small sentences.
Please visit the St Peter’s Church of England Primary School 100 Word Challenge Blog:
http://classes.st-peters-school.org.uk/year6—100-word-challenge.html