Hi Asher,I realy love this peace and I bet you you will get alot of children on two feet again. I exspecialy like the the sentence were you said ‘but our country are sending supplies to help you to help through your hard times and get you back on two feet’.I dont want to sound like simmon cowl but next time when you write a letter at the end for your name you need to start your name with a capital a.
Hi Asher,I realy love this peace and I bet you you will get alot of children on two feet again. I exspecialy like the the sentence were you said ‘but our country are sending supplies to help you to through your hard times and get you back on two feet’.I dont want to sound like simmon cowl but next time when you write a letter at the end for your name you need to start your name with a capital a.
A good piece of writing Asher. I like how you describe what people are doing to help them, that is a really powerful message. Jacob is right, you need to use a capital for your name, especially if you write as well as this, people need to know about your talents!
Hi Asher, I love your writing. Like Jacob and Mr Collard said you need to have a capital letter for the start of a name or a place, like London,Paris,John or Chris. I think lots of people will be really be touched by your writing it was very heart warming. I didn’t know how good you are at writing, keep writing like this you will get a certificate for your good work.
From Scott
Hello Asher good piece of writing like Mr Collard Team 100wc says. That will defiantly encourage lots of the children. I liked how you told them what people were going to do to help them and gave them hope. Jacob’s right though you have to use capital letters when needed!
Hi Asher,I realy love this peace and I bet you you will get alot of children on two feet again. I exspecialy like the the sentence were you said ‘but our country are sending supplies to help you to help through your hard times and get you back on two feet’.I dont want to sound like simmon cowl but next time when you write a letter at the end for your name you need to start your name with a capital a.
Hi Asher,I realy love this peace and I bet you you will get alot of children on two feet again. I exspecialy like the the sentence were you said ‘but our country are sending supplies to help you to through your hard times and get you back on two feet’.I dont want to sound like simmon cowl but next time when you write a letter at the end for your name you need to start your name with a capital a.
A good piece of writing Asher. I like how you describe what people are doing to help them, that is a really powerful message. Jacob is right, you need to use a capital for your name, especially if you write as well as this, people need to know about your talents!
Hi Asher, I love your writing. Like Jacob and Mr Collard said you need to have a capital letter for the start of a name or a place, like London,Paris,John or Chris. I think lots of people will be really be touched by your writing it was very heart warming. I didn’t know how good you are at writing, keep writing like this you will get a certificate for your good work.
From Scott
Hello Asher good piece of writing like Mr Collard Team 100wc says. That will defiantly encourage lots of the children. I liked how you told them what people were going to do to help them and gave them hope. Jacob’s right though you have to use capital letters when needed!