Hi Scott
This is a fantastic 100 word challenge and the strength of your feelings for the children of the Phillipines and all they have suffered really shines through your writing. I like your opening lines where you first say how “very very sorry” you are for the child who may have lost their parents but you ask them to remain strong. I also like how you stress that this should not happen to any human being and how no kid should have to do everything themselves. This is a really good point to make. Your final lines also acknowledge the awful suffering the children must be going through. Well done and keep up the good work.
Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)
Hi Scott
This is a fantastic 100 word challenge and the strength of your feelings for the children of the Phillipines and all they have suffered really shines through your writing. I like your opening lines where you first say how “very very sorry” you are for the child who may have lost their parents but you ask them to remain strong. I also like how you stress that this should not happen to any human being and how no kid should have to do everything themselves. This is a really good point to make. Your final lines also acknowledge the awful suffering the children must be going through. Well done and keep up the good work.
Ms O’Keeffe (Team 100wc)