Billy, thank you for your word challenge this week, well done. Remember to check your spelling or ask someone to check it for you. Also “…you could have lost….” instead of – “…you could of lost…”
If you are ever unsure about the work you have done just ask a teacher to have a quick look. Keep up the good inventive writing.
yours is good because your saying they can get there old life back if they believe that people will help and there not just abandoned from other country’s. well done
Billy,
What a lovely letter- very sad, but you also hit on a positive note when you tell them about the bottles of money and all of the help that people want to give. Well done.
Fiona (Team 100WC)
I love your work. Telling them about what we are sending over to them so they something to look forward to, like bottles of money to get them back on their two feet. You have a good ending probably the best I have seen today. Good work I hope you get some stickers for it.
Sincerely, Scott
Billy, thank you for your word challenge this week, well done. Remember to check your spelling or ask someone to check it for you. Also “…you could have lost….” instead of – “…you could of lost…”
If you are ever unsure about the work you have done just ask a teacher to have a quick look. Keep up the good inventive writing.
yours is good because your saying they can get there old life back if they believe that people will help and there not just abandoned from other country’s. well done
Billy,
What a lovely letter- very sad, but you also hit on a positive note when you tell them about the bottles of money and all of the help that people want to give. Well done.
Fiona (Team 100WC)
I love your work. Telling them about what we are sending over to them so they something to look forward to, like bottles of money to get them back on their two feet. You have a good ending probably the best I have seen today. Good work I hope you get some stickers for it.
Sincerely, Scott