Hi Polly,
WOW! that was an amazing entry. I really enjoyed reading that. you have used a very selective group of wonderful descriptions and outstanding figurative language. your writing has really inspired me to write like you, and ideas
are bubbling in my mind like mad right now .WELDONE!!:):):)
Hi Polly,
You have produced an astonishing peice of writing, your similie really fits where you have placed it and makes the reader wonder who is behind the jeep. Remember next time to put some commas in to make it even better!
Hi Polly,
WOW! that was an amazing entry. I really enjoyed reading that. you have used a very selective group of wonderful descriptions and outstanding figurative language. your writing has really inspired me to write like you, and ideas
are bubbling in my mind like mad right now .WELDONE!!:):):)
Hi Polly,
You have produced an astonishing peice of writing, your similie really fits where you have placed it and makes the reader wonder who is behind the jeep. Remember next time to put some commas in to make it even better!